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Old 07-08-2009, 11:54
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One more wish





One more wish

I beg you please

One more wish

to dry my tears

One more wish

to say goodbye

One more wish

to open my eyes

One more wish

to hold me today

One more wish

to say it’s ok

One more wish

I call you near

One more wish

I want you here

One more wish

wish I could stay

One more wish

with you this day

One more wish

to hold your hand

One more wish

so you’d understand



That I miss you

I wish you
(24/06/06)


This one is one of my fave poems of my own...wrote it 3 years ago...

might have posted it before on the old COL, I don't remember.
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Old 07-08-2009, 12:00
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So simple and beautiful, Ev. Love the last lines. Well done
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I really like it ^-^
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Aww thank you both!
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Beautiful Very well phrased
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Beautiful , simple but very powerful!
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Aww, Ev, that's beautiful
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Old 07-08-2009, 18:39
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Aw thanks guys, it means a lot to me.
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Awww gorgeous poem, simple yet effective
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Thank you Kt!

This is a fresh one .I wrote this one yesterday evening. It's about some personal experiences + something I saw on television that really touched me. Don't know about the title. Might change it later.

Our Last Goodbye

Touch me with Tenderness
For I'm about to Break

Hold me Slightly
enough not to let me Fall

Kiss me softly
While you don't know what to Say

Dance with me Slowly
Until my world stops turning

Dance with me Slowly
Until my world stops turning


(07/08/09)
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